Some of you may have noticed that I've removed all the chapters of Children of the Halo and The Liar's Law from Deviantart. Fret not, because the edition that was up here was the rough draft of both books. (In some cases, the second revision.)
However, I've recently completed the fourth revision and I'm in the process of doing one final pass over Children of the Halo in an effort to pinpoint all the typos and errors I've missed.
Shortly, I will begin posting the new chapters as I complete them on the fifth revision. I would like to humbly request that you read them, even if you've already read the book, and help me pinpoint any errors. Whether in continuity, spelling, grammar or otherwise. Anything that doesn't seem right. (Even sentences which could have been worded better.)
The Second Edition of the Print Version is going to be hard cover, with all-new cover art. I'll keep you all up to date on how it's going.
Have fun.
EJ.



























